Book Name: Innocence Lost – Stories of Child Abuse (Crumpled
Voices 2)
Contributing Authors: Naisargi Bhatt, Pramit Sarkar, Aditi
Sahu, Supriya Parulekar, Sunanda Bhadra, Swathi Shenoy, Nikita Nepali, Dr.
Sunil Kaushal , Piyush Kaviraj, Brinda Tailor, Shreya Ganguly, Vaisakh E Hari, Leena
Ratti, Shikha Kaul, Dr. Lopamudra Maitra, Ummul Fazal Fatima Khan and Tanya
Shrivastava.
Publisher: Gargi Publishers
Price: Rs. 160
My Take:
Eighteen by Naisargi Bhatt
‘Eighteen’ is a poem that describes the life of a girl. The girl
is eighteen years old and recounts to the reader the tale of her life. Very
expressive!
Pang of History by Pramit Sarkar
The story section of Crumpled Voices 2 opens with a bang
with Pramit’s story. Every individual born on this earth is unique in his own
ways. Parents often forget it and compare their child’s ability with others. This
shouldn’t be done. What effect does it have on the child. Read Pang of History!
This has become my favourite!
The Lost and Found Self-Respect by Aditi Sahu
This story touched my heart. Avantika was sexually abused
when she was 4 year old. She tries to forget it as a bad dream and tries to
move on with her life. Does this incident haunt her present? What will she do-
share it with her husband or keep quiet like she did years ago? The narration
of this story has been done very well. A good read!
The White Lily by Supriya Parulekar
Another story of child abuse! Lust is the evil disease which
once contracted can never be cured. Rose’s husband, James is one of those
monsters who abuses young girls in order to satisfy his thirst. He tricks them
in to his stories about monsters and plays with their young, innocent minds. His
current target is Melody. Does she escape from his lusty intentions? The narration
is perfect. Dialogues are crafted well. The poem in the beginning of the story
is like a cherry on the cake. Awesome read!
A Cry- Help Me! By Sunanda Bhadra
Child marriage is a social evil and it really hurts to know
that it is still prevalent in many rural areas of our country. A Cry- Help Me! Talks
about this evil custom and the way a girl’s life is devasted after falling prey
to it. Overall, an average read!
The Lost Dreams by Swathi Shenoy
“You are a gril. You shouldn’t go out late at night.”
“You are a girl. Behave like one! Have you seen your clothes?”
Most of the girls face these talks from our elders. This story
is of that kind. Riya isn’t allowed to participate in the national level match
by her grandparents. Does her mother support her or does she keep mum like
always? The narration is done very well. The flow of the story is also good. It
is the end which stole my heart. An awesome read!
Live like a fairy! By Nikita Nepali
The story did not fit well in the theme – this is what I feel.
However, the story gives a wonderful message. ‘One should take lessons from
life and keep moving’.
The Shadow by Dr. Sunil Kaushal
Rape is a heinous crime. This story is about Soma, a girl
who was raped in her childhood. She was forced in to marriage in order to avoid
the society talks. Has she recovered from the mental torture that the incident
caused to her? What does she do when she encounters the same beast again? The narration
is awesome. The poetry at the start of the story is very touching. An excellent
read!
The Guinea Pig by Piyush Kaviraj
‘Breast Cancer’ stories have always touched me. And so does
this story. The protagonist is kidnapped by few soldiers and is brought to a
laboratory where experiments are conducted. Being a young girl, the protagonist
did not know what the evil minds intend to do to her. She gives in and after
two months of suffering and dizziness, she finds herself in a hospital. What had
happened to her? Why was she admitted? Who had rescued her? I just have one
word for this story- incredible. The plot, the flow of events and the way of
expressing the emotions is simply wow!
The Unheard Cry by Brinda Tailor
Most of the Indian parents confine their thoughts to only
engineering and medicine as the ultimate career option. They fail to recognise
the talents of their child and force them in to engineering or medicine. This story
is sure to bring a change on the minds of parents.
The Loud Silence by Shreya Ganguly
‘Can a prostitute be
raped?’- this is the center of this story. The question seems absurd. Isn’t it?
Read Naina’s story and find out the answer to the above question. The story was
overall a good read!
Tales from a pit deep down by Vaisakh E Hari
This story made me think! I cannot say anything about this
one. I must say I liked reading it.
A Tryst with Naaz by Leena Ratti
Can your family behave badly with you, ill-treat you? This question
arised in my mind as I started reading this story. My doubts were cleared at
the end. Again, good narration! Average read!
Just a lucky day or not by Shikha Kaul
Shikha Ma’am has amazed me with ‘Hidden Husband’ and with
this story too! The story begins with the girl waiting for her mum outside
school. I silently prayed in my mind about her safety. But no! She is
kidnapped. The surprising part of this story lies in its end. The story is amazing!
Lesson Learned by Dr. Lopamudra Maitra
Female foeticide is a crime. I am astonished to see that sex
determination still exists in this modern era of technology and science. Mala’s
foetus is that of a girl child. Her in-laws and husband are forcing her to get
her baby aborted. Does she do it? An overall good read!
Left to be estranged by Ummul Fazal Fatima Khan
Parents and children should give each other some space. They
must respect each other’s decisions and thoughts. They should be more like
friends. This story primarily focuses on current parent-child relationship. A must
read for parents!
That shade of vermilion by Tanya Shrivastava
What started with a bang, ended up in one! The story is
about Ashwin Rathod and his failure as a son and as a husband. Ashwin is so
blind with his career and success that he doesn’t realise that he has left his
wife Aastha in the jaws of death. What happens to Aastha is inexplicable. An
awesome story!
Innocence Lost –Stories of child abuse is a thought
provoking anthology. The stories have been carefully chosen and compiled. All
the stories focus on different issues which makes this anthology unique. The stories
have been edited well.
My personal favorites are Pang of History by Pramit sarkar, The
White Lily by Supriya Parulekar, The Shadow by Dr. Sunil Kaushal, The Guinea
Pig by Piyush Kaviraj, Just a lucky day or not by Shikha Kaul and That shade of
vermilion by Tanya Shrivastava.
I rate:
Cover: 4/5
Stories: 4/5
My overall rating for this anthology is 4/5 stars.
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